Greymouth, New Zealand
Hi jimmyYour writing is amazing. You used lot's of descriptive words in your writing. I liked when you said soon the stick landed in the angry ocean and when you said burr the water is cold put I am determined to get the stick.
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Hi jimmy
ReplyDeleteYour writing is amazing. You used lot's of descriptive words in your writing. I liked when you said soon the stick landed in the angry ocean and when you said burr the water is cold put I am determined to get the stick.