Thursday 11 September 2014

Campfire story - completed

Crack! the fire cooked the marshmallow too much and it blew up. “Urrr” Complained the boy who was called Dillon. He tried to get another one but a strange rustling noise came from the bush. Dillon hugged the bag of marshmallows just as a wild cat jumped on Dillon. Dillon hit the wild cat and the wild cat bit him. Dillon saw the face of it and realized that it was a wild cat, probably an ocelot or a lynx. “a wild cat!” the boy whispered, just as it clawed him and Dillon pinched it hardly. The bush rustled again and Dillon thought it was the cats’ family coming but instead it was… Nigel?! Nigel was the camp leader and he was VERY Angry. “It wants your marshmallows” yelled Nigel “Give it some”. Dillon Threw some marshmallows at it and it ran away into the bush. Dillon Started cooking marshmallows and had So much fun on camp


This is part of my bare bones story

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